Comments on: मलाई माफ गर http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/ :::सयपत्री:::नेपाली भाषाको प्रथम सहित्यिक ब्लग Tue, 01 Dec 2009 01:47:46 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=1.5.1-alpha by: ram bahadur budha http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-168 Fri, 14 Nov 2008 15:23:34 +0000 http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-168 good kbita good kbita

]]> by: laxmi parsda bastola http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-141 Mon, 21 Jan 2008 12:02:22 +0000 http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-141 hi hello good sat ramro chha la baday tapai lai okbey hi hello good sat ramro chha la baday tapai lai okbey

]]> by: Nimesh Giri http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-117 Sat, 21 Apr 2007 18:25:16 +0100 http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-117 Dear Susma Jee Namaskar tatha tapai ko kalam ko pravab ko kamana . Susma Jee tapai ko kavita maa Nepali nare haru ko bibasta ra badheyata ko gandha paya . samaj bikas ko ra samaya ko gate sangha parebartan hunuparchha ra hudai pane 6 . ho nepali nare haru aaja 21 centuary ma pane binasta ko jato mune peserahe ko chhan tara , tapai jasto kalam bir haru ko kalam ko saktee ko agadi natamastak hune chha , mero subhakamana . ra tapai ko kalam ko nirantarta ko asha rakhdachhu . "bho dherai purus timro samanta ko nara malai aaba tayo samanta chahedaina . naree purus 1 rath ka 2 pangra bhandai . bibasta ko phaida lina paidaina . aaba timro guleyo bhanai ma barta basdina . teme arkako huda pane timro name ko sindur ghasdina . ma sirjana ra kalpana dubai hu . tayshali kathet temro name ra samaj ko ghara ma aaba ma basdina . keep it up . i hope one day i am able to red ur kavita sangraha . i like to write kavite too , if u feel i am to be a ur friend let me know ur mail add. Dear Susma Jee
Namaskar tatha tapai ko kalam ko pravab ko kamana .
Susma Jee tapai ko kavita maa Nepali nare haru ko bibasta ra badheyata ko gandha paya . samaj bikas ko ra samaya ko gate sangha parebartan hunuparchha ra hudai pane 6 . ho nepali nare haru aaja 21 centuary ma pane binasta ko jato mune peserahe ko chhan tara , tapai jasto kalam bir haru ko kalam ko saktee ko agadi natamastak hune chha , mero subhakamana . ra tapai ko kalam ko nirantarta ko asha rakhdachhu .

“bho dherai purus timro samanta ko nara
malai aaba tayo samanta chahedaina .
naree purus 1 rath ka 2 pangra bhandai .
bibasta ko phaida lina paidaina .
aaba timro guleyo bhanai ma barta basdina .
teme arkako huda pane timro name ko sindur ghasdina .
ma sirjana ra kalpana dubai hu .
tayshali kathet temro name ra samaj ko
ghara ma aaba ma basdina .

keep it up . i hope one day i am able to red ur kavita sangraha . i like to write kavite too , if u feel i am to be a ur friend let me know ur mail add.

]]> by: karan http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-106 Fri, 19 Jan 2007 13:04:24 +0000 http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-106 susma ji srba pratham namskaar tapaaiko kbita le malai pani eakdamai prabha banayo jibanko yatrama chot ghaau bhaeko bedanasanga pokhiekoma. lekhanu bhako rachha. malai pani mitho lagyo ra dhanyabad chha tapailai susma ji srba pratham namskaar tapaaiko kbita le malai pani eakdamai prabha banayo jibanko yatrama chot ghaau bhaeko bedanasanga pokhiekoma. lekhanu bhako rachha. malai pani mitho lagyo ra dhanyabad chha tapailai

]]> by: Raj"kalu' http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-105 Thu, 18 Jan 2007 02:18:45 +0000 http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-105 Dearpawitra ji Namaste! tapaile kabita marphat saro ghurki lagaunu bhaeko rahechha. kin testo ghurkyaunu bhaeko? sidha bhanda ke hunchha ra? je hos tapaiko manchhelai dhoka nadinu hola mero sujhab matra. Raj"kalu" Dearpawitra ji Namaste!
tapaile kabita marphat saro ghurki lagaunu bhaeko rahechha. kin testo ghurkyaunu bhaeko? sidha bhanda ke hunchha ra? je hos tapaiko manchhelai dhoka nadinu hola mero sujhab matra.
Raj”kalu”

]]> by: raj http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-104 Sun, 07 Jan 2007 15:42:02 +0000 http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-104 के व्यक्त छ यसमा ? एउटा पराजयको अभिव्यक्ति कि वेदनाको क्रन्दन ? के पुरुष पात्रको उपस्थिति बिना नारीका कविता बन्न सक्दैनन ? के व्यक्त छ यसमा ? एउटा पराजयको अभिव्यक्ति कि वेदनाको क्रन्दन ? के पुरुष पात्रको उपस्थिति बिना नारीका कविता बन्न सक्दैनन ?

]]> by: arpan tamang(yonjan) http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-103 Tue, 26 Dec 2006 11:58:03 +0000 http://sayapatri.blogsome.com/2006/12/26/p207/#comment-103 ghimire g.namaskar tapaiko kabita ramro lagyo ajhai pani asa garchhau ki feri pani tapaiko kalam bata samaj sangga bajiyeka kuriti biruddha kalam chalaaunu hunechha bhane asa garekachhau! chahal sayapatriko niyamit pathak:arpan ghimire g.namaskar tapaiko kabita ramro lagyo ajhai pani asa garchhau ki feri pani tapaiko kalam bata samaj sangga bajiyeka kuriti biruddha kalam chalaaunu hunechha bhane asa garekachhau! chahal sayapatriko niyamit pathak:arpan

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